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This was awesome! I love how you struck a similar tone to the narration and dialogue. I'm also really enjoying how you've expanded the universe thus far. The multi-POV here is also one of my favorite aspects. I love when we can see both sides of the story as it develops.

Very eager to see how this continues! So far, it's an excellent continuation and expansion of the original world!

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